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Colin Addis

"I really enjoyed the first edition of Transparent Words there was some fine writing but I think Rubics Cube Again by Sheila E Murphy was outstanding."

David

"I think you should put a biography for each of the writers or at least indicate where they are from in the world. That would add to my enjoyment."

Chris Major

"...congratulations on the first issue of Transparent Words.I enjoyed almost every poem that you selected.I'm not really a great fan of rhyming poetry but 'Wanted' with its gentle rythmn and rhyme really won me over, you could tell Frank Faust really' meant it'.

Paul Laughlin's minimal poems were also very well written,especially 'Hotel Lounge' which was funny and remarkably true, while the pick of this issue for me, is' Tomorrow I'll Give Up' by Neil Addison,grim and earthy -the way I like 'em.

Tony George

A great first edition. The writers have set a very high standard. I was pleased to see some experimental poems.