Transparent Words - Ten

Issue No 10 - DECEMBER 2007


CONTENTS

Editor - Jim Bennett

Introduction
Excerpt from "Song of Myself" by Walt Whitman
An Interview with Gary Blankenship
 
GARY  BLANKENSHIP- RESPONSE TO WALT WHITMAN
 

Walt Whitman

Gary Blankenship

Of Leaves and Songs – Walt and Me

When his Song met the world,

he was old enough to have experienced

lands and people from the Eastern surf

to the raw, unpolished edge of the West,

to know what he did not know

 

 

POEMS BY GARY BLANKENSHIP

IN RESPONSE TO "SONG OF MYSELF".  

 
 

1. Contralto       

2. Carpenter   

3. Children    

4. Pilot 

5.Mate

6. Duck-shooter

7. Deacons 

8. Spinning-gir

9. Farmer

10. Lunatic

11. Printer

12. Limbs

13. Auction Block

14. Drunkard

15. Machinist

16. Policeman

17. Gatekeeper

18. Teamster

19. Racer

20a. Turkey Shoot

20b. Old Men and Young

20c. Marksman 

21. Immigrants

22. Cane Cutters

23. Overseer

24. Dance 

25. Youth

26. Hunter (Wolverine)

27. Reformer

28. Excursion

29. Servant

30. Beadwork

 

 

 
OTHER RESPONSES
 

Pg.17

 

Lois P. Jones


Before he was born he knew who he was

certain that each person he met was a universe
in the world, capable of filling the sky-

 

Pg.18

 

Stuart Nunn

 

Sunday morning - England

 

The newsagent’s assistant scans the heavy papers. She doesn’t see the headlines spelling disaster.

 

Pg.20

 

Alice Folkart

 

A New Song
(a poem after Walt Whitman's,

I Hear America Singing)
 

I hear America singing,

stinging songs, carols of perils, I hear,

I fear.

 

Pg.21

 

Mick Moss

 

Old West

(in response to Gary's 'Turkey Shoot')

 

A nice slice of old west life
where the newly arrived
haven't had time to create a culture
so cling to the old ways

 

Pg.22

Sally James

She wolf - Poem inspired by Gary Blankenship’s poem

Number 26 Hunter  (Wolverine)

 

Some would call me gentle, others kind. They do not know me. I am wild, I am free, am more wolf than human.

 

also

 

A Love Poem

 

Pg.23

 

Sally Evans

 

Settler Scottish of a Song

.

 

 

Hailstorm the in lament a plays piper the

roof the off climbs slater the

light northern the at gape roadsweepers

also

 

The Postcard

 

Pg.24

 

James Bell


Walt you
 
are a long way away in time
even your words have become a distance
we need to cross deliberately

 

Pg.25

 

Ralph La Rosa

 

Man and Book

 

As man and book,

he reads us in himself,

each page a leaf of grass

 

Pg.26

 

Catherine Kanaan

 

Discovering Whitman

 

the uncut hair of graves

 

and now with that fine spun thread

a link between us I take him up

 

Pg.27

 

Stuart Nunn

 

Searching for America
 


This man goes searching for America.

He finds it
everywhere he looks.

 

Pg.28

 

Waiata Dawn Davies,

 

Waitaki New Year

 

 

All day caravans and campervans, will draw

Into our reserve and make a circle round the green.

Awnings will spread, children scatter to take up

games laid down last summer.

 

Pg.29

 

Jonathan Shaw

 

Reading the Australian papers with Walt Whitman on my mind, 12/12/2007

My Latin teacher, the one who once stopped in mid-sentence
when he saw a fox on the hill opposite our window

 

 

Pg.30

 

Nancy Williams Lazar

 

Eternity

 

The atmosphere is not a perfume

though it beckons to be drunk

into the mind

 

also

 

Posing with Butterfly

 

Pg.31

 

Barbara Phillips

 

Nativity Abstraction

 

she nods over the eggnog in her hand

face lined, suffused with tree glow

 

so long ago and yet I can’t forget

she says, as she turns, eyes moist from the smoky

fire or something else, it’s hard to tell

 

 

Pg.32

 

Brenda Morisse

 

Response to "Lunatic" #10
winter

The doorknob makes a fist, threatens my latin
click and spiked dance steps. Torch songs and musk
travel with goodbyes. Dear and sorry stressed, locked
inside the glove compartment,...

 

 

Pg.34

 

Terrie Leigh Relf

 

The woman looks out the window at the falling rain
 

I can't sleep what with waves thrashing against rock
the plaintive scuttle of crabs desperate for a safe haven
from seagulls swooping

Like memory, their lives are dashed against the
barnacle-encrusted pier

 

 

 

End